we were learning to make a thoughtful comment.
we made posters to share what we learnt with you.
when we made a poster we had to write the 5 important words true helpful inspiring necessary kind in to a slide we were aloud to get pictures and make it colorful then we had to put it in to our blogs.
hopefully you leave me a nice comment.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 27 May 2019
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question
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Hey Brayden,
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the words big enough for me to read. I also like the pictures you have chosen because they make me think about blogging. I wonder if all of your steps need a capital letter? Is this the kind of comment that you think is a good one?
- Miss Morgan
hi Brayden
ReplyDeleteI love your poster because it is very colorful it has heaps of different colors. Also i like how you put cool comment pictures onto your poster good job. Next time you could improve by changing some of the colors so it is easy to read.