I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 9 September 2019
our mini swimming game dylan and brayden
me and my friend dylan have been working on a game could mini swimming game the point of the games is to fling a man and how ever went the thurvest won the stadium is called swimmming satadium thanks for listeining
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Hi Brayden, great to see your post about your game. It is great that you have made up your own game, one I have never even herd of before, what a great imagination you have, Mahi Pai!(good work!). Now that you know more about full-stops you can use them when blogging too. I think other children will enjoy playing the game Dylan and you have made.
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