my holidays

this  week we have been working on one thing we did in the holidays so i want to show you my piece of writing     on the holidays  holidays i went to new brighton  playground and it was fun i played tag hide And seek i played with my noah and kaiden  then we had lunch my dad rang me and people said your not aloud to ring  but i said its fake then  i went to play on the trampolines i did a backflip and a front flip people wacthed me and said wow your good i siad thanks dind  i did some cool jumps on the playground and did some cool jumps of the playground rhen me and my friends played cricket soccer and rugby then went back to oascar. then on thursday we did some art we made puppets