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Thursday 27 September 2018

t3w10 Writing

this week we have been using goggle slides to write my story and capital letter to write  my story this week i have been writing about two boy's called brad and jay.
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  1. Miss Walters28 September 2018 at 13:48

    Hi Brayden!

    Well done on a great google slide book! You have some awesome ideas and detail in your writing and I love the illustrations - they are so bright and colourful and really caught my attention as a reader. Next time maybe you could make the font a bit bigger so it's easier to read?

    From Miss W

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  2. Koda21 November 2018 at 11:40

    Hi my name is Koda from Kawakawa primary school. I like that there's images as well as writing. It would be a good picture book. I also like that there is timing in it. You should try adding and to get a better post maybe even a quality blog. More comments coming soon

    Kind Regards,
    Koda.

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