T4W1 Writing

we have to pick one thing we did in the so i want to share my pice of my  writing

106A Carmen Road

Hei Hei

Christchurch 8042

This week I have been writing a letter to somewhere that I have visited in the school holidays. Please read it and leave me a comment.

dear mega air 

In the holidays I went to your trampoline park. Your trampolines are super bouncy. and your foam pit balls are just right for playing dodgeball. Your side trampolines on the wall aren't very great for bouncing off. but I really like yourfoam pit because your foam is so soft. It’s really soft for jumping on and off. The best  trampoline is the basketball pit because you can jump so high and get lots of goals. You could side flip and throw the ball into the basket. In the dodgeball pit why do you need a wall in front of the other team? Is it because the other team might cheat and come .to us and throw the balls at us that won’t be fair if that happened so that's good that the dodgeball pit has a wall in. front of us because the other team might win and that will not be fear of they won.  so i like the medium and small .ones but i can jump on one of the big ones because i'm a good jumper like the jump guards.  when they were little so. i will keep practicing at home on my trampoline. but i usually use my tramp scoot but i really like doing back flips .side flips front flips and next time i come i will do a double side flip oh yeah you can’t do double flips and side flips but .i will do a back flip side flip and last but not least front flip. now the thinks i do like the big boxes look so fun but i can't jump back up on them.  so i go on the small and medium big ones. Your foam pit needs a trampoline like the small one because the top one isn’t very bouncy and the boxes aren't very big. but the one near the dodgeball pit and entrance and. Why do babies only have one trampoline to jump on? The thing I dont like why do we have untill 12 o’clock to hear the rules.? Also I don’t like that people take so long in the foam pit so you could add some stairs to the foam pit and airbag. The thing I really really don't like is the high trampolines. This is because you can only jump off of you can jump back on.now on to the dislike things i don’t really like your trampolin that you have to jump on your back and feet on because it is not that bounce i usually just land on my bottom but it doesn't hurt because trampileons are soft like foam in the foam pit but i still like the trampilens at your trampilene  park.

From brayden